Gnome Away From Home.md
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Marzelvane sipped tea and worried about Thir'rip. The view outside his galley window was beautiful, and it would have been nice to share it with his friend. As his planeship flew through the aether, the milky fog of Equinox—his home plane—slowly diluted, and stars began to twinkle through it.
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-They said they'd come back. Time Raiders could be solitary folk, he'd heard, but Thir'rip would have kept their appointment, sent a message, something. The chimney creaked and Marzelvane grimaced. He was taking a real risk; Thur'rip was supposed to bring back more prismacore and a new nav system. The nav system he could manage without, maybe, but without more prismacore, the Planets Gateway could very well fall apart during the transition to the higher planes.
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+They said they'd come back. Time Raiders could be solitary folk, he'd heard, but Thir'rip would have kept their appointment, sent a message, something. The chimney creaked and Marzelvane grimaced. He was taking a real risk; Thur'rip was supposed to bring back more prismacore and a new nav system. The nav system he could manage without, maybe, but without more prismacore the _Planets Gateway_ could very well fall apart during the transition to the higher planes.
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Oh well. Thir'rip could be in trouble. He'd just have to try and make it to Alloy before the planescape ripped his ship apart.
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